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Marie-Claude Bourbonnais

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Make
CanoScan
Model
LiDE 110
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Okay, to start things off, the overall piece looks pretty good at first glance, though if you take a closer look you can see mistakes here and there. For one thing, I think that her chest is to big for her figure. Now, onto the rest of her anatomy. I think that her hands are a bit on the messy side, but none the less good. In addition to that, the way that the upper side of her body meets up with her right breast looks awkward. Also, though most of them are well place, one of the wrinkles in the shirt by her left breast just doesn't look right for some reason. Next, the background is great and I can't really say that I see any real flaws there. Lastly, the shading. All I have to say about the shading is that it is fairly well placed and that I don't see any real problems with it. Overall this is a pretty good piece. Great work.

This is just my critique, I hope that you don't take offense to anything that I said. If you did, I would like to apologize in advanced.